Today in English we have been assigned the task to read a paragraph from a story and carry it on in our own words. I've chosen Sons and Lovers by D.H Lawrence.
This paragraph is from THIS website
From the book: “She looked at her roses. They were white, some incurved and holy, others expanded in an ecstasy. The tree was dark as a shadow. She lifted her hand impulsively to the flowers; she went forward and touched them in worship.”
What I'm adding on:
She didn't see the small, red prickles still attached to them. She lets out a loud scream, she ran to find someone to help her take them out but she couldn't find anyone. She leapt down the white spiral stairs and scrambled into the bathroom. The bathroom was like no other, the walls were white marble and the sink top was granite. she looked top to bottom to find tweezers and she finally found them in a draw. she yelps as she takes the prickles out one by one.
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